Score: 10

"Very nice game"

submission: Shore Siege!

date: September 3, 2008

The game is rather simple. I've seen this kind of idea a few times before, but this one was kinda different. Maybe because of the art, maybe because of the theme... I don't know, it was just different from what I've seen before. I think this made this game a little more special.

The drawings were very good. I forgot to read the "author comments", but I could easily figure out who inspired the art. Dan Paladin is sure a great artist. The sounds were also nice, matching with the "pirate" theme. Well done.

The game itself was great. It seemed a little boring in the beginning (where we could only use the little nail), but it got constantly better, with the new enemies & weapons. What bothered me a little was the way you have to select the weapons. Maybe if there were a short-cut to them, like some hotkeys or similar...

Overall, a great game, very enjoyable. I really like your games, they're very creative. Keep up the good work!

Score: 9

"HoOoOoday hOoOo!"

submission: Clock Trouble

date: July 4, 2008

Hahaha, this was a nice one. I have never heard that prank before, and animation it was a great idea.

The animation was pretty good. Simple, yet well-made. Something I liked a lot were your "visual recreations" on the prank, like the "Grandfather Clock, now with chimey-chimey" thing. The musics you used were... ehh... alright. I also liked the random pictures in the background, they were pretty funny.

However, I couldn't understand some parts of the prank. It would be better if you added subtitles or something like that, it would make things easier to understand.

Overall I thought it was a nice movie with great animated jokes, but if you added subtitles it would make things better.

Score: 7

"Good idea, but not very well executed"

submission: Delayed Radar

date: June 24, 2008

I enjoed playing this game. It was fun, a little addictive and it had a quiteinteresting concept, which I thought was pretty original. However, the execution of the idea wasn't very well done.

Before anything else, I'd like to point out some things that you could correct in a next version. First, the energy bar isn't displayed on the top right of the screen as you said, but in the top left of the screen. Second, everytime I put the radar over the "Play music" button, the song starts playing, even when it's stopped. And when it's playing, it starts again. and finally, the guns sfx in the menu is too loud, reduce it a little next time.

Despite the mini-glitches listed above, this game wasn't bad. As I already said, I think the idea is quite original and it can turn into something better. The time in some missions was also a good addition, you could put it into more missions. I liked the song you used, I think it matched with the game pretty well. The obstacles made the game more challenging, but if you added more kinds of obstacles then it could have been a better game.

Here are some things that I think that can be improved or added to make this game even better: more kinds of obstacles, more kinds of enemies, a certain number of attempts to find the orbs (you can just click in random places if you want to find the orb) and fixing the glitches.

Overall, it wasn't a bad game, but his could have been better. It has a nice idea, but take your time to improve it.

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Score: 6

"This can be improved."

submission: The Sewer

date: January 25, 2009

Well, for your first attempt at creating a song, I'd say it was good. The song has a pretty "underground" feeling, I believe this was your intention (no wonder why it's called "The Sewer"). I liked the waterdrop effects that you put in the song, they were pretty good.

However, I found this song a little dull. The beat was the same all the time. There were very little effects throughout the song. Basically, you could mute your speakers for a while, unmute them, and it would be the same.

You need to add some variations to the beat, along with some effects. This isn't a bad song, but it has a lot to be improved on.

Score: 9

"You really should be happy with it"

submission: Carbon Baby (part 1)

date: June 7, 2008

From what I listened to, it sounded like something big was coming. This could be used in an intro for a Flash movie, no doubt about it.

The intro sounded like a funeral, with a depressive felling on it. However, the "mood" of the song changes drastically at 0:45. It was a well made change.

The rhythm at the faster part was very good. the song was doing fine when it suddenly ended. Well, it's just a demo, anyway. =)

I'd like to know when you're going to release the final project. It sounds great so far, the full version should be even better. Nice job.

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Score: 9

"Well done!"

submission: Little Wing Jam

date: June 6, 2008

This song is very good. It gets better as it goes on, there's a major change from the intro to the ending, I liked that.

The first 30 seconds were pretty random, like a jam session. You could have reduced it, I didn't like that intro a lot. But after the drums enter, the songs changes completely.

What impressed me the most here was the guitar. You made a great solo in the middle of the song, it was very relaxing and easy to listen, very well done.

Great song, very relaxing, but I suggest you changing that intro a bit.

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